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Latenight Literatus

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Whatever's written on my face
Is far ahead of any pace
I can keep with
Desperate in a dusty dress
Can't close my eyes for any rest
Snapping to my heart beat
Warming my bare feet
I'm ready to run
To find what's on my mind
I'm looking for something
I'm looking for life
I'm looking for you
Spur of the moment poem, subject to change, may be removed or moved to scarps. But I like something about it.
May later remove the first two "i'm looking"s. I was considering turning this into a song; many of my poems are almsot songs, and songs almsot poems. it has been a while since i submitted any poetry, like, an actual poem, haha. though i do feel my prose has been of late slightly poetic. hm, interesting thought.
Any suggestions/comments/critique will be considered and are loved!
To warmth.
~P-F


alt. title: [latenight lonesome] didn't use because: way overused, too emo, whiny, empty feeling. latenight literatus sounds way cooler, has better meaning and has more awesomer alliteration.
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seanfhocal's avatar
I like the triple loking. I wouldnt change it :)